But yet I still believe you. #Poetry

I feel so dumb.
I sit here with tears filling my eyes,
but yet I still believe you.
All you have to say is “I Love You,” and I’ll be right there at your feet.
I gave all of me to you that it pains me to ever leave.
I know you already left me,
but yet I still stay.

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  1. vishal4u Avatar
    vishal4u

    Awesome friend
    👍😊😊

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you

  2. Jayshree Avatar
    Jayshree

    I can’t gv this a like.. I’m left with no words

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      ☺️💐😊💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐

  3. Grabbety Covens Avatar
    Grabbety Covens

    Nicely written and thoroughly felt!!

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you

  4. jenniferelizabethrose Avatar
    jenniferelizabethrose

    Beautifully said x

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you

  5. bowmanauthor Avatar
    bowmanauthor

    Wonderfully meaningful!

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you

  6. Haseeb Avatar
    Haseeb

    Very Good….

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank yoy

  7. Carly (message in stanza) Avatar
    Carly (message in stanza)

    Nice poem and image. 🙂 A slightly happy ending, despite of loss. I guess it’s all in perception, right?

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Yaa

  8. gaillovesgod Avatar
    gaillovesgod

    🙁

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      😊

  9. bluejeansongster Avatar
    bluejeansongster

    Oh sigh…sadly I have felt this way before also.

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Yaa That Movement 🙄 feels so …..

  10. olivera77 Avatar
    olivera77

    …Beautiful!

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you

  11. Natasha Tungare Avatar
    Natasha Tungare

    Beautiful!!

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      थैंक यू

  12. Sarah Al-Haddad Avatar
    Sarah Al-Haddad

    Sometimes loyalty is one-sided, and it’s so disappointing!

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Yaa truely said

  13. Courtney Worthy Avatar
    Courtney Worthy

    Its a Beautiful Poem You wrote, I still believe in my Ex, But i feel that he doesn’t believe in me even as a friend i feel, I will always be by his side but i feel like he isn’t at my side anymore, i feel like he doesn’t love me as a girlfriend or as a friend But i do love him as a friend and A boyfriend but the more i think about him less the more feelings i lose for him I think it’s best to not think about him at all and thank you for the poem you wrote its beautiful

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you buddy glad you liked it

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