Love Snuffed #Poetry

Love snuffed,
drowned in distance,
choked by fear,
too much persistence,
insistence,
hesitance,
reticence,
innocence,
distance,
always too much distance,
and inexperience,
and in my experience,
there’s no good way to leave.

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  1. Jayshree Avatar
    Jayshree

    Lovely, the last line shows your wonderful being😘keep writing

  2. Jayshree Avatar
    Jayshree

    You have a beautiful mind and fantabulous way you put it:)

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you mam 🙏

  3. Tammy7711 Avatar
    Tammy7711

    You’re such an good poet/writer! Keep it up! God bless you!

    1. VishalDutia Avatar
      VishalDutia

      Thank you for blessing 😊💕

  4. VishalDutia Avatar
    VishalDutia

    Thank you, it means a lot 😊🙏

  5. Carly (message in stanza) Avatar
    Carly (message in stanza)

    Unrequited love (how I interpret this poem) is tough. Great poem but it’s so relatable that it hits to the core of me, you know? But well done, Vishal. 🙂

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      VishalDutia

      Thank you mam. Glad you like it

  6. Mina Pukari Avatar
    Mina Pukari

    Generally I don’t learn article on blogs, however I wish to say that this write-up very compelled me to check out and do it! Your writing style has been amazed me. Thank you, very nice post.


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