Love snuffed,
drowned in distance,
choked by fear,
too much persistence,
insistence,
hesitance,
reticence,
innocence,
distance,
always too much distance,
and inexperience,
and in my experience,
there’s no good way to leave.
© VishalDutia
Love snuffed,
drowned in distance,
choked by fear,
too much persistence,
insistence,
hesitance,
reticence,
innocence,
distance,
always too much distance,
and inexperience,
and in my experience,
there’s no good way to leave.
© VishalDutia
Responses
Lovely, the last line shows your wonderful being😘keep writing
You have a beautiful mind and fantabulous way you put it:)
Thank you mam 🙏
You’re such an good poet/writer! Keep it up! God bless you!
Thank you for blessing 😊💕
Thank you, it means a lot 😊🙏
Unrequited love (how I interpret this poem) is tough. Great poem but it’s so relatable that it hits to the core of me, you know? But well done, Vishal. 🙂
Thank you mam. Glad you like it
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