The night sky is so silent here.
white fluff, cold stuff,
drifting,
shifting,
lifting
all the dark away.
to keep the shadows at bay.
i knew i wasn’t ready to let go
i was forced to grow
underneath this snow
although
below
it is so calm
the night sky is so dim here
dusk drops, warmth stops
pleasing,
teasing,
freezing
all the light again
i knew it wasn’t the right thing to do
and now i can’t continue
i have fallen through
even though
below
it was so calm
and i have now lost it all
Follow Vishal Dutia on WordPress.com© VishalDutia
Responses
Beautifully written.
Astounding poem!
Thank you
Beautiful 🌹
Thank you
Lovely ❤
Thank you
Just beautiful words… your stuff always reads easy 😉 I love your work, keep it coming!
~ @illenius
Amazing!
thank you
It’s interesting how darkness usually brings that silence and calmness we need. Poem is a wonderful sentiment 🙂
Thank you
You must log in to post a comment.