Here’s the thing with guts.
your guts , my guts.
I hate your guts,
I want you deep inside my guts.
Guts. They make me who I am,
Indecisive.
But who isn’t?
when it comes to the boy you love, you hate him, don’t you?
Don’t tell me you love him, that’s not love.
Love is hating someone with a passion, a burning passion.
Mad at them for taking parts of you little by little,
but they spark a flame in you,
soon the red flame cools down, it’s blue.
and so you melt, you feel the smile aching,
but you can’t.
You built yourself from scratch, how can someone take all that away from you.
guts, they make me who I am.
I hate him,I love him, but I also fear him.
I can’t help but think of the agonising pain I’ll feel once he leaves me.
Don’t shame me for fearing commitment, it’s not illogical.
The amount of love I hold for him can kill once unleashed, once mistreated.
Can you imagine the damage that’ll be done once he leaves?
guts, they make me who I am.
What if I follow my guts?
I’m no longer secure
I’m no longer me
For if I was I in such predicament,
I wouldn’t let a boy infest my mind the way this one has.
So what if my guts are wrong? They make me who I am.
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Responses
‘Love is hating someone with passion’- Quite unique
Yaa You Hate That Person But Somewhere Inside You Have SoftCorner.. How Much Ever You Hate That SoftCorner Never Goes. So That SoftCorner Comes Out Passionately In The Form Of Hatred. Lol Bahot Bhari Bola Eehh.. ☺
Haha.. Looks like you must have felt those emotions, Love-hatred kind of
No My Friend Lectured Me His….. And I just described the situation in poetic manner.
Agreed, as marvelous as each word of this poem is, it’s within that quote where I sense the most amount of intensity coming from the author.
Are ‘guts’ ever wrong? Not in my experience…great post!!
Not In My Experience Too
its just an awsum post!!
you blended polar opposite in many places of the poem in seemingly splendid manner kudos to the work!
Thank you. Glad you appreciated. 💐
And sure you did justice to his ‘lecture’. Congratulations! Good work as always
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